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"Revisi kalimat"
Introduction 1 :
"It’s better to receive scholarships abroad from within the
country, because abroad better and class of university than in the country.
University abroad is better known for its knowledge and more valuable."
Supporting
Paragraph 1:
(example) :
Going to a new place,
making new friends, and new science.
(Reason) :
Meeting new places, getting more friends, and more science,
knowing the advantages of the place here, more fluent in speaking language .
(Personal Story
) :
Visit the place with history, enjoy the culinary here, enjoy the
beauty of recreation place here and join open trip.
Introduction 2 :
“ receive scholarships in the country”
Supporting Paragraph 2 :
(Example) :
the best course of study at the best university in the country.
(Reason) :
More friends in the country, not far from family, more familiar with universities in the country.
(Personal Story ) :
Want to be able to add insight to the University of the country and get to know more friends in one country.
